Monday, 3 June 2013

The Messy Wave
On On Trac

As the sun was boiling in the sky, we changed into damp freezing wetsuits.
My heart was beating quickly out of my chest with happiness.
Lauren and I ran to the sea; our eyes sparkled just looking at the water.
We grabbed our body boards.

We ran through the wind and jumped with excitement.
"There's a wave, " I screamed happily .
But, as I leapt off my body board the water was approaching my face first; it turned
out to be a MESSY WAVE!!!!!!

By Hajar Algarni.


  1. Hajar, I love this extract especially the piece about the messy wave and we ran through the wind. Fabulous images. Well done